forum Could someone please critique my prologue for a story I might write?

Started March 02, 2021 by @John-Mulaney-Killed-Princess-Diana group

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Question, do you have the doc for the story, because its hard to read it

I can't figure out how to share it :(

Oh ok, so click edit doc and click on about at the top then click on share doc. It will say Page-specific sharing. Click Public then at the top, there is a link. Copy that then posts it. u have to make sure that the doc is public

https://www.notebook.ai/documents/124789 Thanks so much!

No problem and it's good, I see nothing wrong with it. Maybe add more synonyms for some of the words but it looks good

Tysm

No problem, if you need anything else, just message me and I will help